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Week 8 Comments and Feedback

I really like all the feedback and comments I'm getting. They make me feel good about the content I'm posting and they're helpful as far as constructive criticism. I think I'm leaving good comments, probably not the most constructive, but I typically enjoy everything I read and don't have a lot of negative things to say about their stories unless it's a difficulty in understanding. I feel like all the blog comments are good because they're connecting all of us together between stories and our interactions. We're all getting to know one another through our stories and it's really fun. I think looking forward I'm gonna try to focus on giving more constructive feedback rather than just praises. I chose the image below because I thought it was really cute and it's true.


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